heres a story that i diddnt finnish i want u guys to comment your own ending and the one i like the most will have there ending posted and will make up their own prize within reason
the current leader(s) is :Bubba1960 
here it goes
It was a regular day on Club Penguin. I had my usual 333 coins. But, then when I played Cart Surfer, as usual instead of getting my usualy 400 coins I stunk so bad that I got another 333. Of course, now I have 666 
and my friends tried to scare me saying that I am cursed, don’t go to the Dojo. To prove to them the legend was a fake, I went up to the Dojo for ten whole minutes. After ten minutes of me walking around waiting for something to happen, a swarm of Ninja surrounded me, closing in on me and then…
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July 29, 2008 at 11:45 am |
the contest ends in one week
July 29, 2008 at 1:41 pm |
and then the ninja tied you up and threw you in a bag.The sound was muffled so you couldn’t hear.But then you heard a couple of the words they were saying and you recognized a voice.I very strange voice very peculiar voice.It sounded like your best friend,but then you remember thatfriend had told you earlier that they were going to an awesome amusement park.They said that the amusement park was located near the dojo.Then you started to be real quiet,and the ninjas thought they had suffocated you or something.So they opened up the black bag and you sprang out.You caught your breath for a a microsecond and then sprang into action.You kicked all of them in the face and punched one in the stomache which made his stomache tumble making him run out of sight.They did tell you he ate a chili dog earlier so that’s why you did it
.Then when all of them (but one) was knocked unconsious you grabbed the strange one and tied him up on a chair and duck taped his mouth shut.He started to try to scream but the duck tape muffled all the sound he even tried to make.So then you went to pull off the mask,and he tried to kick you ,but you even duck taped his legs together.You pulled off the mask (Oh “No’) and discovered that ,that one ninja was your best friend.You started to tear up (in your eyes) and then he just stared at you.You pulled off the duck tape and then he started to speak.He siad he worked for some type of curse agency that tried to make all the curses a myth.He said that his curse wasn’t a myth.It was a curse.He also said that part of the curse,your friends forgot to tell you about.The other part of the curse was that you will be haunted by ninjas for the rest of the year and todays date was New Year’s.He also mentioned that you had some really bad luck,and gave you a ‘lucky’ rabbit’s foot for some luck,maybe.You went back to your friends who were playing cart surfer at the time.So you sat there and held the rabbit’s foot close by wishing that they got the same amount of coins that you had gotten.They came out and looked in their wallets to find a total of 666 coins.They weren’t frightend because what they told you was all made up.Atleast that is what they thought.You told them the story about your best friend being in a curse agency trying to help you and stuff and they were scared to death.So you double dog dared them to go in the dojo and do what you did.They did and ended up like you with a curse for the rest of the year.Atleast the lucky rabbit’s foot actually did bring some luck,into getting your friends the curse too!
The cursiful End
Written by Shyshy6510 on July 29,2008,an 11 year old,who has made up a beautiful story with a wonderous plot!
starting time: 1:56 pm /ending time: 2:11 pm
123KDE:i rate you 8 out of 10 it is almost imposible 10 out of ten and also if some one gets highr than u u can do a second story and try and get higher!!!!!!!!
July 29, 2008 at 3:09 pm |
lol i’ll come back for a longer ending or shorter ending. lol
July 30, 2008 at 1:10 pm |
lol thanks for the rating and trust me i dont think anyone is gonna come up with a better plot or story
July 30, 2008 at 3:35 pm |
and then they jumped to the floor and smiled. all of them shook your hand and they each gave you 400 coins!
123KDE:6 out of 10
July 30, 2008 at 5:01 pm |
then a ninja with a red bandana said, “howdy doody?”
I was so suprised that I jumped out the dojo window! I started tumbling down the mountain as fast as a penguin sled raceing! Finally, I hit the bottem of the mountain with a thud. And guess who was standing right over me? HERBERT!!!!!!!!! “Well, well, well. what do we have here?” he said to klutzy. “It looks like we have re-captured this annoying brat that has been pestering us since we came to this island!” “Uh-no!” i grouned ” WHY ME!!!!” Kutzy pinched a presser point on my neak and and i was out.
When I came to, herbery had me tied to a post in some cave. Herbert started to tell me what happened. “after I ran out of the boiler room, i met these penguins in the tunnels. they said they hadded been banned from club penguin and wanted revenge on all agents. they had brought shovels and flashlights and dug a tunnel under the dojo. when we got to the other side, we set up a fort using bricks from the dojo. when we where done we started slowly taking more bricks out one be one. when we have enoth bricks the dojo will colapse! Wah-ha-ha!” with that he walked out of the cave, witch now seemed to be made out of bricks. luckly, he forgot about my spy phone. i used the sicers on it and cut throungh the rope. i walked out of the fort and ran twards the dojo as fast as i could! when i got to the
dojo the nijas where still there! they quickly climbed up the walls in retreat. suddenly i got an idea. “WAIT!” i yelled. the ninjas stoped and turned around. “The whole dojo is in danger!” i yelled. the ninjas climbed down to the dojo floor. “what is the problem?” asked the ninja in the red bandana. I quickly toled them about herbert and there faces turned from shok to anger. when i had finished, they bolted out the window. about ten minites later the came back hlodinging kutzy, herbert, and a few penguins. they toled me thanks for telling them the location of herbert. then the ninja with the red bandana steped forward. he said,” we thank you gratly for helping us councer this evil force. for showing your bravery we have decided to give you a coice. would you like to become a ninja?” i thought of all the fun times i wouled have hanging around with them. but then i rememberd my buddys. if i became a ninja then i would never see them again! i said ” i would like too but my buddys would miss me ” and with that i went strait to my buddys igloo and stayed there playing games the afternoon. my buddy asked me if there really was a curse and i said there was a curse, a good curse.
My story has a moral : frendship first.
123KDE:8 out of 10 UH OH A TIE
Bubba1960: cheapscape
July 30, 2008 at 5:10 pm |
They tackled me and tied me to a post they dropped a mask and a tried to get it then a waddling penguin came along.
“Is this yours?” the penguin asked.
“Yes,its mine thank your” i(123kde) answered
Then a little baby penguin came along and bit his flipper acting cute.
“Hey little guy can your bring me something sharp”I asked the tiny little penguin baby.
“Otay” the little baby answered.
it crawled all the way to a bunch of rocks,slowly picked up a little sharp one.
“Here woo go mwister”said the little penguin baby
“Thank you”I answered
as i grabbed the rock with my loose flipper a ninja walks by.
“You ninja I haven’t see your before are you new?”ninja asked
“Yes i am” I answered
As the ninja was talking he un-tied me,I found two coins and gave one to the ninja,and baby.I ran off to the dojo.
At the dojo there were the ninjas, and an unexpected guest hilbert the polar bear.I started hearing on what they were saying.I heard the name rockhopper and catch.
Rockhopper was coming,The ninjas quickly tied him,I ran to a ninja and tackled him.
“My friend is here?,and tiying rockhopper?,Hey ninjas!!!!,i thought you guys wanted my money!!”I yelled
I threw a snowball at hilber he fell out the door,down the moutain,and kept rolling.
Then ninjas quickly ran after him while me and rockhopper stayed,i untied him,then i saw my friend walking toward me in a ninja mask.
“I told you not to come,theres a curse on you,your rabbit foot was lucky after all”My friend said.
“It was,but why would you do this?”I asked.
“it mean’t my life”He answered.
He ran off behind them,some how i had 700 coins in my hands,he gave them to me.
“Well rockhopper we are saved,I never thought u would be here.
I helped rockhopper up and took him to his ship he was almost sleeping and i had to carry him,It was sure was a happy ending except for the part of carrying rockhopper
p.s some home i pressed the comment button and my story wasnt complete so i repeated it
123KDE:i was about to rate you a nine but you copied bubba and shyshy so 5 out of ten
July 30, 2008 at 8:36 pm |
how did i copy them mine is diffrent in mine people talk mine is way diffrent i didnt even read shyshy so im older that u all all of them dont have periods and stuff wow you all really need to learrn so yeah BURN jk i didnt copy
123KDE: yea but at the end with the rabbits fot is wut shyshys had and u know wut never mind i rank u an 8
July 30, 2008 at 8:39 pm |
i get second try cool
July 30, 2008 at 9:06 pm |
They looked at me until rockhopper came with all of the penguins so they ran of they saw hilber about to grabs rockhopper they all threw snow balls at hilbert,hilbert was a snow bear and i was next to him so bad aimers hit me.
“Hello any one get me out?”I asked
Then when the snow melted thanks to a penguin I went to the plaza and there wasa snow nball that was big rolling at me i ran away but wasnt fast on my way a ninja went ahead in front,he tried to grabs me but i grabbed him at threw him to a wall.
“Se ya later sucker!!” I yelled.
So then rockhopper and all the penguins didn’t looks and ran into me that gave me a chanse to pul my self o wtih a pole,I fell out whle every one was in the giant snow ball in a distance hilber was there and got him it was bad luck for both both us.
There i was standing while every one in the snow ball,i ran to the light house,up to the bacon,anjumped of with a jet pack i went all the way to the top of the dojo.
There was a snowman on top I looked around and no one was inside.I sa the ninjas once again they jumped where i was and got me I was stuck t wall with sper glue with rockhopper.
“Get me down becouse you don”t want me to break this wall”I said
I was lying they believed me except for one nnija he told every ne to leave and took off his mask it was my friend.He just pulled me off and ran.
I knew more bad luck would come so I went ahead and locked my self in a cage.
“I shoud be safe here”I said.
Again I wasn’t becouse G was testing his super magnet.wooosh,I got pulled by the magnet,rockhopper was with G he opend the cage and i fell out.
“what are were ou doing in their??”G asked
I didnt answer and ran off,I saw klutzy heading toward the dojo.my friend was there i whispered to him and he came.
“here take this”said my friend as he gave me 770 coins.
“but…but..why?”I asked.
kltzy noticed me,he walked and i ran off.there had to be a way to finally stop this.i went back and but a snow ball bomb G made that I took.BOOMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.It was LOUD,hilbert got blown to the wall covered in ice so did klutzy and my friend.I pulled friend off the wall.
“Thank you im finally free”he said.
“What happened??”I asked
“hilbert made me a slave and a ninja i wanted to run off and i know how weak you are”he answered.
“Its ok your safe now”I said
p.s. i made second i never knew i copied im soo sry ok
123KDE:AWSOME STORY!!!!!!!8 out of 10
July 31, 2008 at 7:11 am |
aparrently there is a 3 way tie dont worry guys i have a tie breaker for all of u that isint that hard so take a vote who votes to move on straght onto the tie breaker or stay here for the rest of the week the voting starts today and ends tonight
July 31, 2008 at 12:57 pm |
if i can vote for two people i choose me and shyshy but u said one so i vote for shyshy her story is a littl bit more action
July 31, 2008 at 1:47 pm |
Wat would be the prize?
July 31, 2008 at 3:25 pm |
thanks juanuaci,for the recommendation,also 123kde i would like to be highly recommended if i win,cool srory both of you guys!
August 1, 2008 at 5:44 am |
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August 1, 2008 at 5:52 am |
Add on story 2
ok. ill try again.
And then everything went black. when i woke up, there where ninjas all around me in a cave in the mine shaft. i said “why have you done this! I thought ninjas where suposed to PROTECT club penguin!” then slowly one-by-one, the ninjas took off there mask. “we are not really ninjas” one said “we are penguins that where banned from club penguin!” “AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” I yelled. ” DONT HURT ME!” “Oh we woulnd hurt you, you are too valiabule a prisonor.” one said. “I understand you have a blog?” “Umm, yes?” i said. “good, good!” said the banned penguin. “I want you to advertize a party at the dojo for tomarrow.” “but why?” i asked. “And does haveing 666 coins have anything to do with this?” Then bad penguin answerd, “of corce! that was just to lure u out here! we took some of your cons right befor you finished! that was t0o lure you here!” I said ” what hapened to the real ninjas?” i asked. “Listen” he said. Then i noticed the squiming sounds from somewhere near. “then next mine cart shoud be along soon. then you can say good-bye to your ninja freinds!” said a Banned penguin “Oh-No!” you dont mean that they are tyed to the track!” i exclamed. ” very good, very good, it seems we have cault a smart one!” said a fake ninja. ” and when a mine cart comes….SMOSH!” i knew i had to do somthing fast. lucky, these penguin had never been secret agents so the didnt know about my spy phone. when they had left, i cut my way through the ropes tying me up. but these penguins where smart, when i reached the ninjas they where tyed up in CHAINS! but then a bottle of hot sause cault my eye. and next to it was a bottle of gasoline for jet packs. i prayed that this would work as i pourd the gas on the chains. Then I put some hot sause on a puffle-O I found and it started flaming I qikly put the flame on the gasoline so that it melted the cains. When that was done I stomped out the flames but before I could untie them, the bad penguins came out they said “You’ve caused use enoth troble! Chain him up boys! Then I herd a voice from behind me “STOP” it said! I turned my head I saw a band of secret agents. Then a bad penguin attacked one of them and It became an all-out brawl! That’s when the ninjas came out. One dropped-kicked a bad penguin all the way to rockhopper island! Then another punced one into a mine cart and sent it rolling down the shaft. One ninja punched a penguin so hard that it ran away screaming “MA-MA! MA-MA!” when all the bad penguins ran away the ninjas also sped off. “How did you find me?” I asked the agents. “Well,” One said “We knew something was up when you went into one of the caves down the mine shaft.” “but how did you know I was there?” I asked. Suddenly, from behind the swarm of agents, Gary appeared. He said “a few days ago I noticed that a number of penguins where disappearing. So I installed a tracking device in your spy phone.” “Good thing you did! If you didn’t I’d be road kill by now!”
THE END!!
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123KDE:10 out of 10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this was the type of story i was looking for!!!! for other penguins its not over yet if any of you get a 10 also you will tie bubba and there will be a tie beaker!!!!
good luck you will need it to even tie bubba!!!!!!!
i repete awsome story bubba!!! great job!
August 1, 2008 at 5:59 am |
KDE! this story took me 3 days! rate it well!
and kde, i no this is kinda last minit but world you like to becom an athor on my site? im going on vacation so when i get back you wont be an athor anymor so plz! will be for a limited time. oreo8000 cant do it because hes going to florida. the other helpers on my sithe dont even know hpw to take screen shots it think. make your disicion qick! im leaving tommarow!
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August 1, 2008 at 12:15 pm |
shyshy stilll and can i work here i can provite snap shots
August 1, 2008 at 2:36 pm |
hey did anyone check out the inapropreat ending someone did?
August 1, 2008 at 4:30 pm |
yep
August 1, 2008 at 4:30 pm |
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August 1, 2008 at 6:50 pm |
well idc anymore i quit it took me like 20 mins. to write that story so oh well!also anyone that has information on taking screenshots on an iMac comp please comment at my site i know how to take them but i dont know how to upload em’ wbich is the prob,please help
August 1, 2008 at 7:03 pm |
and the ninja tought u some slick moves, to breakdance you and the KING NINJA had a breakdancing contest at dance club and everybody voted KING NINJA so he taught you how to recive a black belt in NINJA TRAINNING
123KDE:5 out of 10
August 1, 2008 at 9:46 pm |
i cant add u on my brogroll cuz i quit my site
August 2, 2008 at 1:59 pm |
i did but that wasnt that funny
August 3, 2008 at 10:31 am |
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August 4, 2008 at 5:32 pm |
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August 5, 2008 at 10:16 am |
1 day left
August 5, 2008 at 10:16 am |
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August 5, 2008 at 5:13 pm |
the contest is over no one except bubba comment anymore .bubba what do u want your prize to be
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